Zitat von Christian Günther;173781:Kann vielleicht jemand Korrekturlesen?
George: Have you already heard the news, spreading like wildfire?
John: What is the news about?
George: Paul Revere has ridden to Lexington and said …
Steven: Who the hell is Paul Revere?
George: You don’t know Paul Revere? He was a brave silversmith and an even better general.
John: Do you think it will come to a war with the Kingdom?
George: I’m sure it will. And this is the only way to improve our situation.
Steven: But do you think we, as poor farmers, could win a war against the rich troops of the United Kingdom?
George: I think we have to try. It sounds hard, but if we don’t try to get our independence they will destroy our economic system.
John: And if we lose a possible war? They will punish us for being rebellious. It will become even harder than it is today.
Steven: I don´t know, what I should think. On the one hand it will be good, if we win the war, because of our independence, on the other hand, we mustn´t lose, because then we are all going to die or to be tortured (quälen).
John: You are right, but I think we should not risk a war; also a war would violate the Ten Commandments. Don´t you think so?
George: I do, but I think that god isn´t angry , if we fight for our independence. We are oppressed by the British. If we fight against them , it is allowed to violate the commandments.
Steven: It is so hopeless to fight against the British. I would help , wherever I am needed, but I don´t see a real chance to win the war. The British know our Vulnerabilities and they can use that. And our colonists know the vulnerabilities of Britain too.
George: Believe in yourself and in America. Think of what bad things the British King does. He has refused his Assents to law, which was necessary. He begins a war against his own population in the colonies. Do you want , that these things will be going on and on? We can only stop the king , if we fight against him!
John: I don´t know, actually our situation is not that bad and we have to thank Britain that we are so well developed.
George: You are right, but our good times are gone. We have to change with the time.
Steven: I´m supporting you. You are right. We have to start a war against Britain. I will do everything, that I can to become independent.
John: I don´t know what I think about your opinions. But if you fight, I will do it, too.
George: It is nice to hear from you, my friends. I hope we will sit here again in a few months and tell us our stories about the war, we have won.
So ich hab mal das verbessert, was mir so beim ersten durchlesen aufgefallen ist... Ich glaube allerdings dass ich auch so zwei, drei Sachen hab, die nicht falsch sind, aber einfach - für mich - besser klingen


) kann ich garnicht (hatte im Test 1/11 Punkten..
:o

. Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir helfen und bedanke mich im vorraus